tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552609799912841106.post7623672644592598829..comments2023-12-15T17:39:49.355-08:00Comments on site Rappel: As The If Andrappelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03569445602513667186noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552609799912841106.post-52363485787247665252010-01-13T07:32:23.862-08:002010-01-13T07:32:23.862-08:00Okay, first an apology. I so didn't get this ...Okay, first an apology. I so didn't get this over at Abstract Comics. I must have missed a key link to Scribd, where the whole multi-page work is. The first page by itself didn't live up to (for me) the observation you were making in the lead-in post -- but the whole work DEFINITELY does. So, sorry for my bad reading practice.<br /><br />This is really compelling. The words seem like the love child of e.e. cummings and Gertrude Stein -- cryptic and yet full of meaning in their transforming reiterations. And the words do inter-animate the images in ways I find hard to articulate. I am struck by the productiveness of "limits" in this piece -- a limited set of words, a limited color palette -- and yet, the play within those limits yields so many interesting permutations. I'm definitely going to be returning to look at this more.Jonny Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04461895600346750968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552609799912841106.post-25936866262547236542010-01-13T01:49:17.342-08:002010-01-13T01:49:17.342-08:00wonderful, i thinkwonderful, i thinkChilsum Wintershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15323888434075329091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4552609799912841106.post-19787627942306623652010-01-12T23:47:39.922-08:002010-01-12T23:47:39.922-08:00very nice work! and that shocking "the end&qu...very nice work! and that shocking "the end" page 23 :)pszrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01815242943371171959noreply@blogger.com